I saw the following slide coming by in my Twitter feed (original post):

Here are some things I fixed:

• Message in the title

• 19.7% -> 20%

• Simplification of the labels

(For those of you interested in the political context: Israel is fragmented in many population groups, the Israeli high-tech sector which is mostly secular, pro-democracy, situated around Tel Aviv, and not really represented in the current government is making the case that it generates a big chunk of the Israeli economy and is bank rolling many other sectors.)