There is no better person to get VC pitch advice from then the people who sit at the receiving end of your presentation. Here are startup VC pitch suggestions from a few well known people in the industry. Click on the image to see what to they have to say.
Art: Frans Hals, Regents of the St. Elizabeth's Hospital in Haarlem, 1641
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